02-06-2014, 08:26 AM
Hey tectak
Actually soon after I posted that revision I was gonna take it down but then since no one was commenting I just left it. It became clear to me the edit was trying too hard and was running in place a bit. Though I worked on it some after, I think I need to do a total dismantling. Thanks for the comments, I'll take them into consideration.
Just fyi the stuff in the first bit wasn't supposed to be credible since it's a dream, but point taken. It's too erratic, I'm not guiding my readers well enough.
Once I get something figured out rest assured I'll post. Thanks again!
-justcloudy
Actually soon after I posted that revision I was gonna take it down but then since no one was commenting I just left it. It became clear to me the edit was trying too hard and was running in place a bit. Though I worked on it some after, I think I need to do a total dismantling. Thanks for the comments, I'll take them into consideration.
Just fyi the stuff in the first bit wasn't supposed to be credible since it's a dream, but point taken. It's too erratic, I'm not guiding my readers well enough.
Once I get something figured out rest assured I'll post. Thanks again!
-justcloudy
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