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Just for a night-- edit 2

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01-31-2014, 08:50 PM

Thanks billy and Dale, clearly I'm not succeeding at what I hoped to do here. Very valid points, I'll keep working at it!

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Just for a night-- edit 2 - by justcloudy - 01-30-2014, 08:14 AM

RE: Just for a night - by MissingBob - 01-30-2014, 11:11 PM

RE: Just for a night - by justcloudy - 01-31-2014, 07:04 AM

RE: Just for a night-- edit - by billy - 01-31-2014, 12:22 PM

RE: Just for a night-- edit - by Erthona - 01-31-2014, 03:06 PM

RE: Just for a night-- edit - by justcloudy - 01-31-2014, 08:50 PM

RE: Just for a night-- edit 2 - by justcloudy - 02-01-2014, 12:10 AM

RE: Just for a night-- edit 2 - by tectak - 02-06-2014, 01:11 AM

RE: Just for a night-- edit 2 - by justcloudy - 02-06-2014, 08:26 AM

RE: Just for a night-- edit 2 - by billy - 02-06-2014, 10:04 AM

RE: Just for a night-- edit 2 - by justcloudy - 02-06-2014, 07:28 PM

RE: Just for a night-- edit 2 - by justcloudy - 02-08-2014, 01:21 AM

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