01-31-2014, 07:04 AM
Wow what an incredibly useful critique Bob, thank you!! You've given me tons to work with. I really like the direction this is going, but as usual I begin with too much wordiness, and get too rooted in and need help seeing straight.
Really appreciate the time you put into this, hopefully I'll come back with a worthy edit. ;D
-justcloudy
And lol to the burning teddy. Very Breaking Bad-esque. ;p
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Really appreciate the time you put into this, hopefully I'll come back with a worthy edit. ;D
-justcloudy
And lol to the burning teddy. Very Breaking Bad-esque. ;p
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.