If I Awake to Flames After I Die

[Blake]

If I awake to flames after I die
to make eternal payment for my sin,
I will not raise my voice to question why
remembering the man that I had been.
But cast into oblivion, if He,
the Perfect Judge, should look my way with grace
and offer lovingly to pardon me
if only I would run again life’s race
more faithfully, without conceited pride,
the greed-filled lies, the lust, this time to live:
my passions and my wealth to set aside…
I know of but one thing I would not give.
Those moments spent with you I would not sell
to save my soul eternity in hell.

I enjoyed this one, very good and nice rhythm. My only suggestion would be to separate it into stanzas to make it easier on the eyes and avoid the "wall of text" effect.