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Sunday afternoon-- edit 3

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01-22-2014, 08:04 AM

Thanks for your very useful crit Bedside. Very good points all, I'll get working on an edit. I appreciate it!

-justcloudy

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Sunday afternoon-- edit 3 - by justcloudy - 01-21-2014, 08:02 PM

RE: Sunday afternoon - by justcloudy - 01-22-2014, 08:04 AM

RE: Sunday afternoon - by 71degrees - 01-22-2014, 08:45 AM

RE: Sunday afternoon - by justcloudy - 01-22-2014, 09:23 AM

RE: Sunday afternoon - by trueenigma - 01-22-2014, 09:27 AM

RE: Sunday afternoon - by justcloudy - 01-22-2014, 09:30 AM

RE: Sunday afternoon - by trueenigma - 01-22-2014, 09:37 AM

RE: Sunday afternoon - by ellajam - 01-22-2014, 11:35 AM

RE: Sunday afternoon-- edit 1 - by justcloudy - 01-22-2014, 08:06 PM

RE: Sunday afternoon-- edit 1 - by ellajam - 01-22-2014, 08:56 PM

RE: Sunday afternoon-- edit 1 - by justcloudy - 01-22-2014, 09:55 PM

RE: Sunday afternoon-- edit 1 - by trueenigma - 01-22-2014, 11:01 PM

RE: Sunday afternoon-- edit 1 - by justcloudy - 01-23-2014, 06:06 AM

RE: Sunday afternoon-- edit 1 - by trueenigma - 01-23-2014, 06:15 AM

RE: Sunday afternoon-- edit 2 - by justcloudy - 01-23-2014, 06:48 AM

RE: Sunday afternoon-- edit 2 - by Dinosta - 01-23-2014, 01:39 PM

RE: Sunday afternoon-- edit 2 - by 71degrees - 01-24-2014, 03:07 AM

RE: Sunday afternoon-- edit 2 - by justcloudy - 01-24-2014, 08:27 AM

RE: Sunday afternoon-- edit 3 - by justcloudy - 01-29-2014, 10:11 PM

RE: Sunday afternoon-- edit 3 - by trueenigma - 01-30-2014, 04:05 AM

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