My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade

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My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade

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#21

01-28-2014, 02:35 AM

Todd, thank you for that idea. I'll consider it as well. Smile

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#22

01-28-2014, 05:56 AM

I really like the first 10 lines of this most. For me the rhythm seems to flow pretty well to this point, but after line 10, started at the ragged jagged line rhythm seems to fall apart a bit.

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