people telling me I suck
#13
Well, my mind might be. But, no it is all how I represented some historical events in my life. The wording references things that are personal and emotional. So, I was sort of expecting someone to have a different reaction to those parts.

It occured to me that I could read this in sort of a "poetry jam" type of voice and I would find that annoying. So, maybe that is what is bothering people.

But, I am a novice. If you can't say something nice, then go ahead and say whatever. We're helping each other, I think.
Reply


Messages In This Thread
people telling me I suck - by cheyrn - 01-17-2014, 10:59 PM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by rowens - 01-18-2014, 02:24 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by cheyrn - 01-18-2014, 04:26 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by rowens - 01-18-2014, 04:40 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by ellajam - 01-18-2014, 04:52 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by cheyrn - 01-18-2014, 09:24 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by cheyrn - 01-19-2014, 02:22 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by rowens - 01-19-2014, 02:59 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by cheyrn - 01-19-2014, 03:41 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by rowens - 01-19-2014, 03:55 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by cheyrn - 01-19-2014, 04:08 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by clemonz - 01-20-2014, 03:53 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by cheyrn - 01-20-2014, 04:00 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by clemonz - 01-20-2014, 04:03 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by cheyrn - 01-20-2014, 04:28 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by clemonz - 01-20-2014, 04:31 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by tectak - 01-20-2014, 04:42 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by clemonz - 01-20-2014, 04:47 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by ellajam - 01-20-2014, 04:41 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by rowens - 01-20-2014, 04:50 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by cheyrn - 01-20-2014, 05:26 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by rowens - 01-20-2014, 05:52 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by cheyrn - 01-20-2014, 06:39 AM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by clemonz - 01-20-2014, 07:41 AM
RE: people telling me I suck - by billy - 01-20-2014, 12:24 PM
RE: Ooh, baby ooh - by rowens - 01-20-2014, 06:44 AM
RE: people telling me I suck - by Leanne - 01-20-2014, 10:52 AM
RE: people telling me I suck - by Erthona - 01-20-2014, 11:15 PM
RE: people telling me I suck - by Blake - 01-21-2014, 01:11 AM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!