01-19-2014, 03:41 AM
I will take your word for it. But, what am I supposed to do with that advice?
Honestly, I am unable to see what doesn't make sense. This is all concerning very important (to me) events in my life, and I see all of the references and imagine how they could be interpreted if I were another person. If I could have help on where I am being blind it would be a big help. But, I think I should withdraw this poem. Or, otherwise say that I will not be anticipating additional criticism. I welcome additional criticism though.
Honestly, I am unable to see what doesn't make sense. This is all concerning very important (to me) events in my life, and I see all of the references and imagine how they could be interpreted if I were another person. If I could have help on where I am being blind it would be a big help. But, I think I should withdraw this poem. Or, otherwise say that I will not be anticipating additional criticism. I welcome additional criticism though.