01-17-2014, 07:30 AM
Making it longer as you have only seems to make matters worse. It feels like an isolated scene from a story with better parts. It lacks the better parts.
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“Lucky” number seven. Edit 1
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“Lucky” number seven. Edit 1 - by Codry - 01-16-2014, 04:32 AM
RE: “Lucky” number seven. - by rowens - 01-16-2014, 07:39 AM
RE: “Lucky” number seven. - by Codry - 01-16-2014, 04:15 PM
RE: “Lucky” number seven. - by Heartafire - 01-16-2014, 08:07 AM
RE: “Lucky” number seven. - by YouAreMe - 01-16-2014, 11:30 AM
RE: “Lucky” number seven. Edit 1 - by tectak - 01-18-2014, 12:42 AM
RE: “Lucky” number seven. Edit 1 - by rowens - 01-16-2014, 10:29 PM
RE: “Lucky” number seven. Edit 1 - by Codry - 01-17-2014, 01:17 AM
RE: “Lucky” number seven. Edit 1 - by rowens - 01-17-2014, 01:20 AM
RE: “Lucky” number seven. Edit 1 - by Erthona - 01-17-2014, 01:58 AM
RE: “Lucky” number seven. Edit 1 - by rowens - 01-17-2014, 07:30 AM
RE: “Lucky” number seven. Edit 1 - by Codry - 01-17-2014, 08:47 AM
RE: “Lucky” number seven. Edit 1 - by rowens - 01-17-2014, 10:39 PM
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