The Embrace of Creation

[Codry]

The ultimate connection with creation.
Outpouring love energized,
words incompetently describe,
feelings before or since.
All channels open and forgotten …
our unique moment for body and soul,
electrified and infused;
overwhelmed by physical instinct and spiritual love,
drenched in sweat, blessings and grace.
I AM made.

Bathed with intention of love and commitment,
an image transforms the instant of love …
Into me.
A new being, confirming God’s eternal love,
with each breadth taken.

Capital letters from the beginning of the line. The structure is too crowded and some lines go better in other places than the ones you have chosen , spelling, the image looks disrupted it's a bucket of adjectives to what and linked to who ?. The words should dance but it looks like a bullet point list.