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The Embrace of Creation
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01-14-2014, 11:05 PM
Hi Mikeodial, Your opening line needs to define 'what' is the ultimate connection with creation. Additionally, it is difficult to connect the dots between your lines throughout. Essentially, there is too much abstraction and no concrete images, visual similie or metaphor to connect the reader to your spiritual experience herein. I would add some imagery to your next edit. Cheers/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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The Embrace of Creation - by Mikeodial - 01-14-2014, 09:15 PM
RE: The Embrace of Creation - by ChristopherSea - 01-14-2014, 11:05 PM
RE: The Embrace of Creation - by Mikeodial - 01-14-2014, 11:45 PM
RE: The Embrace of Creation - by ChristopherSea - 01-14-2014, 11:57 PM
RE: The Embrace of Creation - by Codry - 01-15-2014, 05:42 AM
RE: The Embrace of Creation - by Blake - 01-15-2014, 05:53 AM
RE: The Embrace of Creation - by Heartafire - 01-15-2014, 06:13 AM
RE: The Embrace of Creation - by Alex13 - 02-21-2014, 09:01 AM
RE: The Embrace of Creation - by billy - 02-21-2014, 09:25 AM
RE: The Embrace of Creation - by Alex13 - 02-21-2014, 01:29 PM
RE: The Embrace of Creation - by sheepy - 02-21-2014, 09:16 AM
RE: The Embrace of Creation - by Erthona - 02-21-2014, 10:11 AM
RE: The Embrace of Creation - by AngelOfFire - 02-26-2014, 07:45 AM
RE: The Embrace of Creation - by NobodyNothing - 03-05-2014, 02:45 PM
RE: The Embrace of Creation - by clmakai - 03-17-2014, 01:56 AM
RE: The Embrace of Creation - by milo - 03-17-2014, 01:59 AM
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