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Underneath

Blake

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01-14-2014, 02:09 AM

I enjoyed reading this one, great use of visual, descriptive words. Also pretty good rhyme and rhythm. I've always felt that both rhyme and rhythm add a certain "magic" to poetry that freeform simply doesnt deliver, good job.

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Underneath - by LaughGiraffe - 07-15-2013, 09:27 AM

RE: Underneath - by mwhite0017 - 08-29-2013, 11:45 AM

RE: Underneath - by cidermaid - 08-30-2013, 02:22 AM

RE: Underneath - by The Jester - 01-09-2014, 07:59 PM

RE: Underneath - by teejai - 01-12-2014, 12:31 PM

RE: Underneath - by tomoffing - 01-12-2014, 07:41 PM

RE: Underneath - by Blake - 01-14-2014, 02:09 AM

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