01-12-2014, 04:14 PM
at present it has a sort of charlatan feel to it. i was expecting a tonic to stop Barbaric Freddy's disease 
a general comment would be to flesh it out. show us what the happening is. it does have potential.
i saw freddy as JC a JC who was actually freddy.

a general comment would be to flesh it out. show us what the happening is. it does have potential.
i saw freddy as JC a JC who was actually freddy.
