12-27-2013, 12:12 PM
(11-09-2013, 05:39 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote: Emily/Cloudy/Brandon edit 4 Thanks fellow poets!What a really cool cat-shaped poem. I like how the subject is a socialite...they sure do own us don't they? I noticed that "worshiped" is spelt wrong, very minor. Great work! Cheers!
My
lady is a
connoisseur of comfort
and pampered luxury.
She ventures out
donning her richest furs,
assuming a mood of lavishness.
She saunters into the room,
alights upon my bed.
Lithe and seductive
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on all fours, she
stretches out in
a long elegant arc.
I draw my fingertips
from her lovely nape
down perfect contours
as she turns her head,
gazing at me enthralled.
In the dark, her eyes are
enchanting topaz lanterns;
she leaves me mesmerized.
She knows that ancients had
worshipped her as a goddess.
Brushing her body against me,
gliding smoother than silk
she reclines into my lap
purring ever so softly,
beckoning my
caress.
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My
lady is a
connoisseur of comfort
and pampered luxury.
She ventures out
donning her richest furs,
adopting a mood of lavishness.
She saunters into the room,
alights upon my bed.
Lithe and seductive
*** on all fours ***
she stretches out in
a long elegant arc.
I draw my fingertips
from her lovely nape
down perfect contours
as she turns her head,
gazing at me in ecstasy.
In the dark, her eyes are
enchanting topaz lanterns;
she leaves me so hypnotized.
She knows that ancients had
worshipped her as a goddess.
Brushing her body against me,
feeling smoother than silk
she reclines into my lap
purring ever so softly,
beckoning my
caress.
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