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The Caucus Race

Nihil Loc Offline

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12-16-2013, 01:24 PM

Wasn't aiming for any complete form, just trying to fill in 10 syllables per line as an exercise with rhyme scheme.

Feels somewhat clean to me but I do see the fluff and the generic aspect.

Meter looks arduous.

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The Caucus Race - by Nihil Loc - 12-16-2013, 11:16 AM

RE: The Caucus Race - by billy - 12-16-2013, 12:09 PM

RE: The Caucus Race - by Nihil Loc - 12-16-2013, 01:24 PM

RE: The Caucus Race - by billy - 12-16-2013, 03:54 PM

RE: The Caucus Race - by Nihil Loc - 12-16-2013, 04:54 PM

RE: The Caucus Race - by billy - 12-16-2013, 07:12 PM

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