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Boardwalks (edit #4.1)

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12-15-2013, 07:45 AM

I came across this way too late to help you shape it: It is perfect as is. I just wanted you to know that it moved me greatly, and your word choice and spacing made the poem for me. It is strong, and it is brilliant. Only praise, no crit this time.

love ya,

mel.

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Boardwalks (edit #4.1) - by ellajam - 11-14-2013, 10:57 PM

RE: Boardwalks - by Charlesjoseph - 11-14-2013, 11:51 PM

RE: Boardwalks - by ellajam - 11-15-2013, 12:17 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by ChristopherSea - 11-15-2013, 01:17 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by ellajam - 11-15-2013, 01:57 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by ChristopherSea - 11-15-2013, 02:13 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by ellajam - 11-15-2013, 04:15 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by SirBrendan - 11-15-2013, 03:02 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by ellajam - 11-15-2013, 03:23 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by SirBrendan - 11-15-2013, 04:02 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by ChristopherSea - 11-15-2013, 09:14 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by ellajam - 11-19-2013, 01:16 PM

RE: Boardwalks - by milo - 11-19-2013, 01:23 PM

RE: Boardwalks - by ellajam - 11-19-2013, 01:40 PM

RE: Boardwalks - by milo - 11-19-2013, 02:00 PM

RE: Boardwalks - by trueenigma - 11-19-2013, 02:24 PM

RE: Boardwalks - by ellajam - 11-19-2013, 10:03 PM

RE: Boardwalks - by milo - 11-20-2013, 01:34 PM

RE: Boardwalks - by ellajam - 11-20-2013, 07:36 PM

RE: Boardwalks - by milo - 11-20-2013, 11:46 PM

RE: Boardwalks - by ellajam - 11-21-2013, 12:19 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by milo - 11-21-2013, 05:20 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by ellajam - 11-21-2013, 06:58 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by milo - 11-21-2013, 07:31 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by ellajam - 11-21-2013, 09:06 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by milo - 11-28-2013, 01:36 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by ellajam - 11-28-2013, 01:47 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by milo - 11-28-2013, 01:54 AM

RE: Boardwalks - by ellajam - 11-28-2013, 01:57 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #1) - by milo - 11-28-2013, 02:00 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #1) - by ellajam - 11-28-2013, 02:07 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #1) - by milo - 11-28-2013, 02:11 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #1) - by ellajam - 11-28-2013, 02:24 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #1) - by milo - 11-28-2013, 10:44 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #1) - by ellajam - 11-30-2013, 12:15 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #1) - by trueenigma - 11-30-2013, 03:43 PM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #1) - by ellajam - 11-30-2013, 09:58 PM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #1) - by trueenigma - 12-01-2013, 01:18 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #1) - by ellajam - 12-01-2013, 01:23 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #1) - by LanceRocks - 12-01-2013, 02:40 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-01-2013, 06:08 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by 71degrees - 12-01-2013, 09:21 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-01-2013, 08:49 PM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by trueenigma - 12-01-2013, 11:50 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-11-2013, 10:59 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:13 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-11-2013, 11:26 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:27 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-11-2013, 11:39 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:44 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-11-2013, 11:47 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by milo - 12-11-2013, 11:55 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-11-2013, 12:04 PM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by milo - 12-11-2013, 12:05 PM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by trueenigma - 12-11-2013, 12:06 PM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-11-2013, 12:22 PM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by milo - 12-12-2013, 06:06 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-12-2013, 07:30 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by milo - 12-12-2013, 07:35 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-12-2013, 12:40 PM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by trueenigma - 12-12-2013, 02:01 PM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-12-2013, 10:31 PM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by bena - 12-15-2013, 07:45 AM

RE: Boardwalks (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-15-2013, 08:28 AM

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