Ides of May, Minus Three

[trailertrash]

How do you believe the short lines affect the reading value?

Also, how are you choosing your line breaks?

It is written as I would read it aloud. That is how the line breaks are chosen and how the reading value would be affected.

let's see how this explanation hold's up in milo's lab©

here it is read with the current linebreaks"

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now let's compare that to if you included no line breaks at all:

May, I interject begins the Taurus season and true to your birth you have since spent your life so characteristically - an émigré, wandering aimlessly
a sightseer, shooting the unfamiliar landscape a bull, loosed in a curiosity shoppe who, sympathizing with the down-trodden natives picks out yet another historical trinket for his growing collection of nostalgia - as if surrounding oneself with clutter from the past could somehow alter the undeniable shape of things to come.