Ides of May, Minus Three

[milo]

'I know my form is shit... I don't plan on working on it.' -Speaktaboo

Remind you of anyone? Sorry, had to do it. I like the two word lines. Any chance you could you learn to live with them? They're important to me. Seriously, I'll take another look. Thanks for your remarks.

How do you believe the short lines affect the reading value?

Also, how are you choosing your line breaks?

It is written as I would read it aloud. That is how the line breaks are chosen and how the reading value would be affected.

let's see how this explanation hold's up in milo's lab©

here it is read with the current linebreaks"

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now let's compare that to if you included no line breaks at all:

May, I interject begins the Taurus season and true to your birth you have since spent your life so characteristically - an émigré, wandering aimlessly
a sightseer, shooting the unfamiliar landscape a bull, loosed in a curiosity shoppe who, sympathizing with the down-trodden natives picks out yet another historical trinket for his growing collection of nostalgia - as if surrounding oneself with clutter from the past could somehow alter the undeniable shape of things to come.