Ides of May, Minus Three

[milo]

Love the tone on this. You set the scene really well. The two word lines kinda bother me. Maybe too many?

'I know my form is shit... I don't plan on working on it.' -Speaktaboo

Remind you of anyone? Sorry, had to do it. I like the two word lines. Any chance you could you learn to live with them? They're important to me. Seriously, I'll take another look. Thanks for your remarks.

How do you believe the short lines affect the reading value?

Also, how are you choosing your line breaks?