12-09-2013, 05:49 PM
Love the tone on this. You set the scene really well. The two word lines kinda bother me. Maybe too many?
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Ides of May, Minus Three - by trailertrash - 12-09-2013, 02:55 PM
RE: Ides of May, Minus Three - by Speaktaboo - 12-09-2013, 05:49 PM
RE: Ides of May, Minus Three - by trailertrash - 12-10-2013, 02:15 AM
RE: Ides of May, Minus Three - by milo - 12-10-2013, 02:24 AM
RE: Ides of May, Minus Three - by trailertrash - 12-11-2013, 01:20 AM
RE: Ides of May, Minus Three - by milo - 12-11-2013, 06:37 AM
RE: Ides of May, Minus Three - by trailertrash - 12-11-2013, 07:32 AM
RE: Ides of May, Minus Three - by milo - 12-11-2013, 07:39 AM
RE: Ides of May, Minus Three - by Speaktaboo - 12-10-2013, 02:58 AM
RE: Ides of May, Minus Three - by Todd - 12-11-2013, 01:26 AM
RE: Ides of May, Minus Three - by trailertrash - 12-11-2013, 01:44 AM
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