Ripples Novel Chapter 6--Revision 3

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Chapter 6

He then held the inhaler in front of his face. “Tell you what, Tyler. You want him to have it. You give it to him.” He placed the inhaler on the floor out of reach. “You better hurry though, I don’t think ol’ Ben has a lot of time.” He inhaled deeply, and covered Ben with the exhaled cloud. The coughing had a wet, deep sound to it.

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Just because the word "inhaler" is used a few times, in reference to Ben, when I first read "he inhaled" - I got confused. I thought perhaps Ben inhaled.
Maybe it would help to say. "He took a long drag" or "He pulled deeply" or .. well, you get the point.

I'm really enjoying the read - thanks! Jenn