Ripples Novel Chapter 6--Revision 3

Ripples Novel Chapter 6--Revision 3

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11-21-2013, 04:25 AM

No explanation necessary. I appreciate the comments Alison. I'm mostly doing it this way so the pronouns don't get confusing, but if you don't feel they are, it wouldn't be a difficult fix.

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Ripples Novel Chapter 6--Revision 3 - by Todd - 11-20-2013, 12:34 PM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 6 - by cidermaid - 11-21-2013, 04:21 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 6 - by Todd - 11-21-2013, 04:25 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 6 - by tigrflye - 11-21-2013, 04:42 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 6 - by Todd - 11-21-2013, 04:49 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 6 - by cidermaid - 11-21-2013, 05:19 PM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 6 - by Todd - 11-21-2013, 08:03 PM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 6--Revision 3 - by ChristopherSea - 01-16-2014, 05:48 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 6--Revision 3 - by shemthepenman - 01-18-2014, 11:32 AM

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