Unheard reverse edit 1. bena,keith
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Unheard reverse edit 1. bena,keith
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11-15-2013, 05:54 AM
Oh shi, you're totally right. I got so focussed on those two lines I ignored the fist comma of ' a moving moan,'. I forget the formal word for it, but you're spot-on that this is the main subject of the sentence.
If I could say only one thing before I die, it'd probably be,
"Please don't kill me" |
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Unheard reverse edit 1. bena,keith - by tectak - 11-15-2013, 01:16 AM
RE: Unheard - by ChristopherSea - 11-15-2013, 01:59 AM
RE: Unheard - by tectak - 11-15-2013, 02:38 AM
RE: Unheard - by SirBrendan - 11-15-2013, 04:49 AM
RE: Unheard - by tectak - 11-15-2013, 05:19 AM
RE: Unheard - by SirBrendan - 11-15-2013, 05:54 AM
RE: Unheard - by bena - 11-15-2013, 09:08 AM
RE: Unheard - by tectak - 11-15-2013, 04:49 PM
RE: Unheard - by Keith - 11-15-2013, 11:19 AM
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