11-13-2013, 12:32 AM
(11-12-2013, 11:59 PM)Todd Wrote: I found quite a bit of the content clever, especially the sirens at the end. My only real disappointment is that it didn't keep to the fun meter it established in the first two lines.I don't know todd, i was afraid after i wrote that opening line that i would muck it up. I haven't written a poem that rhymes thru-out in years. Generally i only leave a rhyme in my work when it comes to me by accident as that one did, but i like the contrast.
Cheers,
Chazz