Whoosh (Edit 1)

Whoosh (Edit 1)

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11-12-2013, 07:13 AM

Thanks again for the suggestion, Todd! Smile

I have a feeling I will use this poem as a basis for another poem in the future; I like the playfulness of the poem as it is, but for me it doesn't have a real emotional core yet. But it's a start, I guess. Wink

(11-12-2013, 02:10 AM)Todd Wrote: Yes, fantastic edit. I love the danger in S2 now.

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Whoosh (Edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 11-11-2013, 08:25 PM

RE: Whoosh - by Todd - 11-11-2013, 09:44 PM

RE: Whoosh - by jdvanwijk - 11-11-2013, 10:21 PM

RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by beaufort - 11-12-2013, 02:06 AM

RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 02:10 AM

RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 11-12-2013, 07:13 AM

RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 07:33 AM

RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 11-12-2013, 05:13 PM

RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 08:18 PM

RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by tectak - 11-12-2013, 09:08 PM

RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 11-12-2013, 11:52 PM

RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by tectak - 11-14-2013, 04:38 AM

RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by gilmored - 12-09-2013, 04:00 PM

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