Whoosh (Edit 1)
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Edit 1: more danger in S2? (Todd)

I love riding
the fast train,
eyes closed:
Neil Armstrong
on a horse.

Even better,
on the platform,
right on the edge,
close your eyes -
wait -

all Creation
crashing by!


Original:

I love riding
the fast train:
eyes closed,
Neil Armstrong
on a horse.

Even better,
to the tracks, closer
than you should -
all Creation
crashing by!
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Messages In This Thread
Whoosh (Edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 11-11-2013, 08:25 PM
RE: Whoosh - by Todd - 11-11-2013, 09:44 PM
RE: Whoosh - by jdvanwijk - 11-11-2013, 10:21 PM
RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by beaufort - 11-12-2013, 02:06 AM
RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 02:10 AM
RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 11-12-2013, 07:13 AM
RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 07:33 AM
RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 11-12-2013, 05:13 PM
RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 08:18 PM
RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by tectak - 11-12-2013, 09:08 PM
RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 11-12-2013, 11:52 PM
RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by tectak - 11-14-2013, 04:38 AM
RE: Whoosh (Edit 1) - by gilmored - 12-09-2013, 04:00 PM



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