I'm Farther Away Than Before

[PaulineG]

I'm going to work more on it- I did have questions maybe you'd have advice. the 'knight in shining armor' is supposed to be that. So what would you recommend to make that more clear? I'm wondering how I could play with breaks more, maybe I could make that the focus of the poem instead of the flowers.

I'm going to think about the imagery to replace "love me more than you say"

Thanks Todd, you were very helpful!