Pic Poetry: Not pain, not nostalgia.

[justcloudy]

people will make you doubt that you’ve ever loved,
they do not want to admit that they
were stupid enough to fall for someone who
could crush them with 5 words.

I’ve been in love
yeah I’ve been
so, into a
love
that I lost it all, in grayed caves
I doubted reality
and became messy patchwork,
a half-truth, a blackened will.

I always love your work.

it's balanced. and real. and somehow inevitably true.

this is basically perfect. one tiny suggestion:

and became a messy patchwork,
of half-truths, and blackened will.

one way or another, I'm a fan.