if we disagree with someone elses crit/feedback or point of view, there is no need to say "i disagree with you" it will probably be evident in any feedback you give. it's also more a feedback on the critic than the poem. :J:
the poem in it's present format has a feel of Tourette's about it
i do like the last two snippets as they are but would like to see the thing with more meat on it's bones.
if you don't use punctuation then using the dash; -, is cheating
the poem in it's present format has a feel of Tourette's about it
i do like the last two snippets as they are but would like to see the thing with more meat on it's bones.
if you don't use punctuation then using the dash; -, is cheating