Standing on the Moors

[milo]

Thank you for your very useful help with the meter, ThePinsir

You know, I kept wondering why "vibes" just didn't feel right, though that was the best rhyme I could forge. I think you've hit the nail on the head; it's too modern and weird for a pastoral. The "too many limbs" line is meant to indicate that the dance is being performed by a group of people in perfect harmony, as if they were one being. Thank you for your very helpful feedback, milo

ahh . . . perhaps the confusion arose because I didn't quite pick up on who or what was doing the dancing but I see it was a multitude dancing as one, now the image makes sense.