June

[FayandFire]

Round wooden barrel with a fifth of rain water, still.
Gravel litters the space below, Not a bit of grass has grown.
To the left, pine it must be, a home built with time
Oaks and fellow maples cast a shadow around the small abode.
The birds fly through the sky singing a melody quite known, Maybe put a . not a , unless that's what you were going for.
Heat is compounding over surfaces as if seen by the eye.
It must be ninety, very well could be the day the ground is
broken only if the wind will blow.

I got that this was a moment in time that clearly made you think of something. I just wish I knew what that was. There's a lot of good detailed description here that many posters say distracts from the meaning of your piece and they may be right. What's really important? What are you really trying to say? This moment in June, was it just a moment to share, or something meaningful and thought provoking. I, as your possibly daft reader just didn't see the significance. My best advice is take everyone one else's.
Thanks for the read.
- Fay