A Child's Proof
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Thank you so much to SirBrendan and ThePinsir for these comments! I'm currently making edits and will probably have a new version up by the end of the day. The Cleopatra and Judas references were, as SirBrendan guessed, chosen because I thought they sounded cool. I'll do a little bit of self searching and figure out what would be a more natural way to restructure those lines. Thank y'all, once again, for the critique (and the kind words!). Blush
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A Child's Proof - by priya - 10-28-2013, 11:12 AM
RE: A Child's Proof - by SirBrendan - 10-28-2013, 08:07 PM
RE: A Child's Proof - by priya - 10-29-2013, 01:07 AM
RE: A Child's Proof - by ThePinsir - 10-28-2013, 10:25 PM
RE: A Child's Proof - by ThePinsir - 10-29-2013, 02:22 AM
RE: A Child's Proof - by demuzzled - 11-01-2013, 04:33 AM



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