What the Cats Know

[ChristopherSea]

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Thanks much Tom for the thorough read and recommendations. Most of those minor knots are easily untangled and I agree with the majority of them. I did have 'scars' before 'my journey and unspoken history', Perhaps, I'll put a stop in and add them back for clarity. Synapses do lie bare, as they are open junctions that prevent conduction of nerve impulse, muscle contraction, etc., unless a neurotransmitter (chemical messenger) bridges the gap. Yes yes Chris. I know all that....but how is ANY of that "lying bare"?The line serves as a metaphor for revealing it all, down to the microscopic level and biochemical level. I thought of glass banana, (((NOT))), but it did not have enough layers to peel back. Ah...so Globe, then? It is difficult to convey very personal confession in poetry to others, which is the precise thesis herein. As always, your expertise is always appreciated!

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OK, I don't like it now. I'll go with 'synapses form' or 'synapses bathe'. Let me see.