What the Cats Know
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Thanks Ella for the detailed reading and critique! This kind of free verse is pretty subjective, so all suggestions are valid depending on how the read goes. The lab coat goes with the job, but the hyphen can go and perhaps the over-. Yes, I lost all mystery before the moon, but none before the sun, which is the thesis herein. Much obliged for your time and I shall credit you in the next edit. Cheers/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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What the Cats Know - by ChristopherSea - 10-18-2013, 07:20 PM
RE: Bridled Layers - by ellajam - 10-18-2013, 07:38 PM
RE: Bridled Layers - by ChristopherSea - 10-18-2013, 07:46 PM
RE: Bridled Layers - by Todd - 10-18-2013, 07:53 PM
RE: Bridled Layers - by ChristopherSea - 10-18-2013, 08:06 PM
RE: Bridled Layers - by ChristopherSea - 10-18-2013, 10:17 PM
RE: Bridled Layers - by Todd - 10-18-2013, 10:20 PM
RE: Bridled Layers - by ChristopherSea - 10-18-2013, 10:23 PM
RE: Bridled Layers - by tectak - 10-21-2013, 06:13 PM
RE: Bridled Layers - by ChristopherSea - 10-21-2013, 07:01 PM
RE: Bridled Layers - by tectak - 10-21-2013, 09:12 PM
RE: Bridled Layers - by ChristopherSea - 10-21-2013, 09:25 PM
RE: Bridled Layers - by milo - 10-21-2013, 11:36 PM
RE: Bridled Layers - by ChristopherSea - 10-22-2013, 12:05 AM



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