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10-16-2013, 11:59 PM

edit #4:

I've done some work on Spring hoping to address some of the issues all of you have been so kind to point out. All comments are welcomed. Any thoughts on whether or not this needs punctuation?

Thanks so much for all the help I've gotten with this.

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Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by ellajam - 09-10-2013, 07:22 AM

RE: Two For Alice - by cidermaid - 09-10-2013, 04:47 PM

RE: Two For Alice - by billy - 09-10-2013, 05:40 PM

RE: Two For Alice - by ellajam - 09-10-2013, 08:06 PM

RE: Two For Alice - by ChristopherSea - 09-10-2013, 08:51 PM

RE: Two For Alice - by ellajam - 09-10-2013, 10:13 PM

RE: Two For Alice - by ChristopherSea - 09-10-2013, 10:31 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #1) - by spookyfoot - 09-11-2013, 08:38 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #1) - by ellajam - 09-11-2013, 09:59 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by ChristopherSea - 09-11-2013, 12:07 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by ellajam - 09-11-2013, 12:26 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by ChristopherSea - 09-11-2013, 07:02 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by billy - 09-11-2013, 12:41 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by ellajam - 09-11-2013, 12:53 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by billy - 09-11-2013, 01:12 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by ellajam - 09-11-2013, 09:17 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by rowens - 09-12-2013, 12:16 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by Todd - 09-12-2013, 01:48 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #2) - by ellajam - 09-12-2013, 02:40 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #3) - by ellajam - 09-15-2013, 02:16 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #3) - by cidermaid - 09-15-2013, 02:36 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #3) - by ellajam - 09-15-2013, 02:45 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by ellajam - 10-16-2013, 11:59 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by tectak - 10-17-2013, 12:49 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by ellajam - 10-17-2013, 01:16 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by tectak - 10-17-2013, 04:18 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by ellajam - 10-17-2013, 11:36 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by tectak - 10-18-2013, 12:05 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by ellajam - 10-25-2013, 07:50 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by Todd - 10-25-2013, 08:52 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by ellajam - 10-25-2013, 09:00 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by tectak - 10-26-2013, 04:43 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4) - by ellajam - 10-26-2013, 05:12 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by tectak - 10-26-2013, 05:44 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by ellajam - 10-26-2013, 06:05 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by tectak - 10-26-2013, 06:15 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by yourfellowhuman - 12-03-2013, 09:40 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by ellajam - 12-03-2013, 09:52 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by Canaan McGee - 12-04-2013, 11:21 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by ellajam - 12-04-2013, 11:39 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by Todd - 12-04-2013, 11:42 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by milo - 12-04-2013, 11:45 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by ellajam - 12-04-2013, 11:54 AM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by milo - 12-04-2013, 12:44 PM

RE: Two For Alice (Edit #4 with punctuation) - by ellajam - 12-04-2013, 12:58 PM

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