Unititled

[tectak]

helplessness is blind
the symphony of consciousness
stops in the air
with the mad chatter
of unseen audiences

Anything is better than Uni Titled. How about Polytitled.
Enough. You must give it a title so that we know you know what it's about. Are you a poet or not? Can't think of a title? Some wordsmith.
Concept? Not clear. You seem to see with your ears. Lost it in one.
Punctuation? None. You either cannot do it, or worse, think there is something virtuous in the ommission.
Rhythm? None developed. Terse verse. Terse crit.
Yes, I think you are right about Uni Titled.
Best,
tectak
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