10-12-2013, 11:55 PM
The first half has promise. The For I had been there before can get rid of the For. Maybe even been here instead of been there.
The descent
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The descent - by Intricate B - 10-11-2013, 09:08 AM
RE: The descent - by rowens - 10-12-2013, 11:55 PM
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