Venus
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I don't "get" a ton about rhyming poetry, but when you've been in a rhyme scheme the whole way through, why back out on the last line? Knowing you, it's just to be a smart ass. It's like someone playing 7 notes of a scale on a piano then walking away....drives me absolutely buggers. I made the mistake of telling some of my classmates that when I was majoring in music and since we had a piano in our dorm lobby, they'd do it just to make me go down 3 flights of stairs just to finish it off properly. I know I'm mostly complaining, but you are good at that, too!

love ya,
sg
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Venus - by Erthona - 09-19-2013, 04:11 AM
RE: Venus - by tectak - 09-19-2013, 05:30 AM
RE: Venus - by Erthona - 09-19-2013, 01:31 PM
RE: Venus - by tectak - 10-08-2013, 04:47 PM
RE: Venus - by Erthona - 10-09-2013, 10:27 AM
RE: Venus - by ChristopherSea - 10-10-2013, 03:36 AM
RE: Venus - by jdvanwijk - 10-11-2013, 05:12 AM
RE: Venus - by jringo_ - 10-11-2013, 06:09 AM
RE: Venus - by bena - 10-12-2013, 09:25 AM
RE: Venus - by Erthona - 10-12-2013, 04:23 PM
RE: Venus - by Laura Marx - 10-12-2013, 06:26 PM
RE: Venus - by Erthona - 10-16-2013, 03:27 PM
RE: Venus - by jdeirmend - 10-17-2013, 07:45 PM
RE: Venus - by Erthona - 10-17-2013, 10:09 PM
RE: Venus - by jdeirmend - 10-20-2013, 09:19 PM



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