Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision)
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Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision)
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10-11-2013, 05:58 PM
Hi Malu, I appreciate the critique. Love your read on fight/flight and the Skinner box, and I'm gratified that it feels to you like it's going in the right direction--editing is always tricky. I'll wait to see if there's any more comment before coming back to explain the last 4 1/2 lines (so I don't prejudice the interpretation).
Thank you again. Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision) - by Todd - 10-09-2013, 06:18 AM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall - by billy - 10-09-2013, 05:03 PM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall - by Erthona - 10-09-2013, 05:13 PM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall - by Todd - 10-09-2013, 11:08 PM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision) - by Malu - 10-11-2013, 02:01 PM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision) - by Todd - 10-11-2013, 05:58 PM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision) - by tigrflye - 10-11-2013, 09:24 PM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision) - by Todd - 10-11-2013, 09:45 PM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision) - by bena - 10-12-2013, 07:21 AM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision) - by Todd - 10-12-2013, 08:12 AM
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