I could die
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102, you're fine. 104 is life threatening, 106 is when brain death begins, and of course 113 is nearly certain of death. You got some cushion room, I'm just kidding that is indeed very detrimental. I liked how you encompassed pretty much everything that comes with the standard flu in a simple way, no crazy metaphors about living on the sun, or disgusting details of being on the loo. I also enjoyed the rhyming. Thanks for the read.
I never highlight my flaws or deficits
Because none of that will matter when death visits
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I could die - by Keith - 10-11-2013, 08:02 AM
RE: I could die - by Malu - 10-11-2013, 02:16 PM
RE: I could die - by Keith - 10-13-2013, 03:21 AM



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