Broke down palace. critique?

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Broke down palace. critique?

Intricate B
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10-10-2013, 03:39 PM

Thank you billy..
I have been told I add too many unnecessary lines,
Yet lack yhe ability to remove them.. diarrhea of the mind?

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Broke down palace. critique? - by Intricate B - 09-28-2013, 04:45 AM

RE: Broke down palace. critique? - by Todd - 09-28-2013, 06:37 AM

RE: Broke down palace. critique? - by billy - 09-28-2013, 10:11 AM

RE: Broke down palace. critique? - by Intricate B - 10-10-2013, 03:39 PM

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