Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision)
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Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision)
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Billy & Dale, I appreciate the comments. This is something I wrote some time ago. I was struggling with balancing the villain's monologue with the imagery. Let me push this the other way, and see if that takes us somewhere.
As always, thank you for the feedback. Best, Todd The revision is up.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision) - by Todd - 10-09-2013, 06:18 AM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall - by billy - 10-09-2013, 05:03 PM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall - by Erthona - 10-09-2013, 05:13 PM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall - by Todd - 10-09-2013, 11:08 PM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision) - by Malu - 10-11-2013, 02:01 PM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision) - by Todd - 10-11-2013, 05:58 PM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision) - by tigrflye - 10-11-2013, 09:24 PM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision) - by Todd - 10-11-2013, 09:45 PM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision) - by bena - 10-12-2013, 07:21 AM
RE: Lex Luthor: On Why We Fall (Revision) - by Todd - 10-12-2013, 08:12 AM
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