10-09-2013, 05:13 PM
Todd,
This part is good:
"I also dream of the precipice and the pit,
and of bodies in free fall
under a red sun."
The rest just seems to obvious and too contrived.
It's a decent idea, (devil is god, god is devil), but there is just no feeling of inspiration about it, until that last part.
Dale
This part is good:
"I also dream of the precipice and the pit,
and of bodies in free fall
under a red sun."
The rest just seems to obvious and too contrived.
It's a decent idea, (devil is god, god is devil), but there is just no feeling of inspiration about it, until that last part.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.