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10-08-2013, 11:30 PM

I really like this poem. And I do agree with ellajam on cutting the last lines to make the ending stronger, it's just an opinion so if it holds an portrayed significance keep it how you like. Smile

Thanks for the read

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Was it? - by Mogra - 10-08-2013, 02:05 AM

RE: Was it? - by Malu - 10-08-2013, 03:43 AM

RE: Was it? - by Mogra - 10-08-2013, 04:28 AM

RE: Was it? - by Malu - 10-08-2013, 04:53 AM

RE: Was it? - by ellajam - 10-08-2013, 10:24 PM

RE: Was it? - by Glittercake - 10-08-2013, 11:30 PM

RE: Was it? - by Mogra - 10-09-2013, 01:27 AM

RE: Was it? - by ellajam - 10-09-2013, 06:12 AM

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