Was it?

[Malu]

I see how crumble does match, I just thought there could be scraps of metal that broke off during impact, so they both fit decently, which one is chosen is just opinion. For the smoke-o-whisp I was just making a funny (pokemon reference, that one attack, it's like will-o-whisp or something) no real critique there. And I'm glad you clarified the fleeing skyward line, it comes together more for me now with both aspects encompassed. I don't see anything wrong with keeping heart as the word, that was just a minor suggestion. The five lines each with only one word, your reason is very valid for that emphasis. Which is usually the case. Glad you appreciated the comments.