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(09-22-2013, 01:26 AM)OliverPorano Wrote:  helplessness is blind
the symphony of consciousness
stops in the air
with the mad chatter
of unseen audiences
What I noticed was what someone had already said with the audio/visual senses imbalance. This seems to kind of touch on the "calm before the storm" idea? Something "big" is about of happen? All in all, I liked the combination of these words, mad chatter and symphony of consciousness. Rather short, but still concise, speaks to some degree in pretty good volume.
I never highlight my flaws or deficits
Because none of that will matter when death visits
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Unititled - by OliverPorano - 09-22-2013, 01:26 AM
RE: Unititled - by ellajam - 09-25-2013, 03:39 AM
RE: Unititled - by OliverPorano - 09-25-2013, 08:08 AM
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