10-07-2013, 01:59 PM
(09-22-2013, 01:26 AM)OliverPorano Wrote: helplessness is blindWhat I noticed was what someone had already said with the audio/visual senses imbalance. This seems to kind of touch on the "calm before the storm" idea? Something "big" is about of happen? All in all, I liked the combination of these words, mad chatter and symphony of consciousness. Rather short, but still concise, speaks to some degree in pretty good volume.
the symphony of consciousness
stops in the air
with the mad chatter
of unseen audiences
I never highlight my flaws or deficits
Because none of that will matter when death visits
Because none of that will matter when death visits