10-04-2013, 11:29 AM
The "litany of hairs" is scattered from left to right, and the door is standing open behind. I love the idea of replacing "hairs" with "prayers", so much so I don't why I didn't think of it myself. I'll make an edit in a moment. Thank you very much for your awesome feedback, bena
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

