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(content warning) Midnight Movie
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10-04-2013, 11:29 AM
The "litany of hairs" is scattered from left to right, and the door is standing open behind. I love the idea of replacing "hairs" with "prayers", so much so I don't why I didn't think of it myself. I'll make an edit in a moment. Thank you very much for your awesome feedback, bena
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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(content warning) Midnight Movie - by heslopian - 10-03-2013, 11:35 AM
RE: (content warning) Midnight Movie - by ellajam - 10-03-2013, 12:05 PM
RE: (content warning) Midnight Movie - by heslopian - 10-03-2013, 12:11 PM
RE: (content warning) Midnight Movie - by Apophrades - 10-03-2013, 12:14 PM
RE: (content warning) Midnight Movie - by heslopian - 10-03-2013, 12:19 PM
RE: (content warning) Midnight Movie - by Apophrades - 10-03-2013, 12:29 PM
RE: (content warning) Midnight Movie - by heslopian - 10-04-2013, 03:59 AM
RE: (content warning) Midnight Movie - by bena - 10-04-2013, 08:52 AM
RE: (content warning) Midnight Movie - by heslopian - 10-04-2013, 11:29 AM
RE: (content warning) Midnight Movie - by Apophrades - 10-04-2013, 11:38 AM
RE: (content warning) Midnight Movie - by heslopian - 10-04-2013, 11:50 AM
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