10-04-2013, 08:33 AM
bena- yep, I think quotes are a good option here, will put them in if that line stays in a future re-write.
dale- I noticed that line was "dangling" in an edit, but liked the ambiguity (originally I was indeed referencing the narrator).
tectak- helps quite alot actually, will reference when the time comes (presumably it will) to re-write this.
p&p
dale- I noticed that line was "dangling" in an edit, but liked the ambiguity (originally I was indeed referencing the narrator).
tectak- helps quite alot actually, will reference when the time comes (presumably it will) to re-write this.
p&p