3,320.75 Miles

[billy]

I am on my weekly rounds of visiting the forgotten poem. This one takes the cake at over 2,100 views and zero reponses. You would think that one out of over 2,000 could have said something. I hope you were not shooting for 3,320.75 views without comment. It is a nice tribute to Hawaii (? I assume). There is no place like home, is there?

I know the reason....ppl don't respond to long poems. Its sad, but true.

I really loved the imagery, and really felt your longing. Good job here.

bena.

i read it all the way through a couple of times. i refused to to say "i didn't think much of it" because it's in the for fun forum and i don't see how a negative remark here does any good. poets shouldn't really expect feedback in the for fun forum and miscellaneous unless it's asked for; and if it's asked for why not post it in one of the feedback forums :J: