10-03-2013, 04:05 AM
Whew, I'm done for now.
A giant thanks to all of you who have been so generous with your time and so willing to poke and prod this meager poem.
I've surely taken all your comments to heart, and they still poke and prod as I edit new work. This thread has been a great learning experience for me.
I've returned to the original with a few changes that I hope are an improvement. I missed my old poem, tis what it tis.
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A giant thanks to all of you who have been so generous with your time and so willing to poke and prod this meager poem.
I've surely taken all your comments to heart, and they still poke and prod as I edit new work. This thread has been a great learning experience for me.
I've returned to the original with a few changes that I hope are an improvement. I missed my old poem, tis what it tis.
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